Dialogue words such as 'said' don't convey character emotions and dynamics. Enrich your dialogue with other words for said.
I remember how polite the homicide detective was when he questioned me (everyone is a suspect in their world). I remember that there was an amazing amount of blood on the bed, floor, walls, and even the ceiling. In the same building there was a Lao family – three generations in a sm...
job, community, or within your family) will help you to make an impact both in and out of the classroom while enrolled at UT. (maximum 40 lines, or approximately 250-300 words)
as a change from the standard third person controls would likely alienate those not willing to give it a try, but the basic idea of having a bunch of gadgets and a variety of levels to catch monkeys in still feels like it could have plenty of potential in modern games. ...
So he questioned the round innocent eyes, and saw his own boy-face focused as in double camera lenses. Amy's cousin was in earnest. He looked down at the opal ring, touched and sorry he could've ever had a mean thought like wanting to dig his nails into Randolph's palm. "I like ...
Western free society is seriously sick too. The symptoms pop up here and there, but one of the most disgusting is the massive support for the alleged “people of Palestine”—that is, Hamas—in this whole monstrous story. I really don’t understand HOW it has been possible, after the atr...
“I have never been so questioned,” he cried. I showed him that I knew his secret, “Rome was not built in a day,” said I. “He! He!” he cried. Then, as I turned away, he put his head from behind the clock-case and tapped his forehead with his forefinger. So also ...
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especially since I went first. It was the most open I had ever been about my life and I was relieved there was no cross examination. Now liberated, I freely questioned classmates who followed with their personal stories. But my turn came when the group decided there would be a second roun...
Even when this official literary ethic was questioned in the late eighth century, mastery of traditional learning and codes of behavior remained a primary way for members of the new literati class, largely lacking aristocratic backgrounds, to achieve success through the examination system.33 While ...