考研英语作文在线批改范例七 Cooperation Makes Us SuccessHow vivid and thought-provoking the picture is in decreasing a modern social phenomenon about cooperation!As is clearly and symbolically shown in the painting,two disable men support each other with their powerful hands to keep walking.What we ...
考研英语待批改作文: As is subtly shown in the cartoon, two tourists are taking sightseeing on a small boat while discarding their picnicing leftovers casually into a lake which is already littered and filled with flowing rubbish like plastic containers, banana skin, bottles, tins and so on. An...
考研英语作文批改点评如下: The picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how to protect the environment. There are two men sitting on a boat, and throwing some garbage to the water. The river behind them is full of rubbish.(对图片内容的描述不够充分) The purpose of this picture is to s...
考研英语作文在线批改范例一 发布时间:2016-03-01 编辑:查字典英语网小编 大作文评语: 你将文章分为了四段,首段对合作进行了阐述,在第二段时才对漫画进行描述,一般来说,这种写法也是没有大问题的。但为了保险起见,我们通常将文章分为三段首中尾最好,首先将漫画的内容描述清楚,然后讨论漫画中体现的合作精神,...
考研英语作文批改点评如下: Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to recommend myself as an editor of your magazine Economist which advertised in the newspapertwo months ago(时间太长,两个月之前的招聘广告很有可能已经过期). I do wish to have the opportunity ofhaving worked(这里不用完成时...
考研英语作文在线批改范例发布时间:2016-03-01 编辑:查字典英语网小编Directions: Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. Directions: You live in...
1、学员报名后,下载2011考研英语第一次作文批改题目。下载 2、学员将自己独立完成的作文发送至kaoyandaoxue2011@126.com 3、英语教研室老师对学员作文进行专业化批改,3个工作日左右发至学员邮箱。 4、学员查收。 提交重要说明: 1、全程班、联报班学员需注明自己的报名用户名与所报班型。
2010考研英语作文在线批改范例四 大作文评语: 满分20分 评分:10 总的说来,你没有将图画的意思阐释清楚,发散的有点远。作文的文法错误太多,希望你先从简单句子开始,然后再写多一些长难句。你需要尤其注意的是副词和形容词你时不时分不清。不过,你对文章的大体结构掌握的很好。另外,一定要注意:第一段、第一句话...
本文是考研英语作文在线批改范例,共有7个批改范例。 2010考研课程免费试听考研 论坛 各位同学好: 以下是两个作文话题,大作文题目是2008年考研英语写作的真题,另外一个是常见小作文呢题。大家请在其中至少选择一篇作为写作练习题目,然后将完成的作文发送到批改的邮箱,由专业教师帮助大家修改。
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