a lecture hosted by a UCL admissions officer personally made Li Shixue excited. This lecture not only gave her a deeper understanding of UCL's teaching philosophy, but also pointed out the direction for her application.
增强表达能力，而不是东一榔头西一棒子。相较其他院校而言，UCL更加侧重你的概念，看你能不能够通过非常...
but at least let the admissions officer know that you’re trying and willing to learn by showing...