Three substantial changes I made to my essay. I improved the introduction, provided more examples of college writing and my personal experiences in my body paragraphs and fixed the conclusion. In paragraph one, is where I made my first change the introduction was too short and needed more detai...
【题目】write an essay(two or three paragraphs long or207-300 words)about one of the following topic S.describe a person or place you know well. Reme mber to answer these questions. Also keep in mind that the reader dose not know the perso n or place you are describing!描写人的话,要...
其中it指代上文中的the point or main idea of your essay。故选A。(3)题详解: 根据上文“Once you have written a good opening paragraph, it is time to write the body. You’ll usually produce at least three supporting paragraphs.(一旦你写好了开头段落,就该写正文了。你通常要写出至少三个支持...
The three-story thesis is a beautiful thing. For one, it gives a paper authentic momentum. The first paragraph doesn’t just start with some broad, vague statement; every sentence is crucial for setting up the thesis. The body paragraphs build on one another, moving through each step of th...
Three-paragraphEssay:BodyparagraphFirst,examiningthepatientandcheckinghishealthconditionbeforetheoperationarecritical.Hehastocheckthepatient’sbloodpressureandheartconditionandgivehimabloodtest;inaddition,heshouldgethispastmedicalrecord.Ifnecessary,heshouldgivehimsomespecialtests.Onlyafterheknowsthepatient’shealth...
So cut away the first paragraphs. Get rid of them. Start your (new) essay with the last couple of paragraphs you wrote for the (old) essay. Why? Because they work better. And because you wrote them when you wereon firefor the assignment. ...
yet we so often take that hard thinking from our writers. The worst essays my students wrote was the only one in which I gave a prompt, and before you think it’s just because that was their first essay, nope, I asked them. They just didn’t care — and that is the worst way to...
“I shouldn’t be talking about this.” His resolve broke when she rubbed against him, the motion intentionally distracting. “Alright, listen. Nobody’s really sure what happened. I was at the forum with my father when Ephara appeared out of nowhere.” ...
“. . . the ‘hamburger’ format with the opening and closing paragraphs being the two buns and the body being the meat. . . is a disservice to students, and to nonfiction writing, but also an insult to hamburgers. . .” (16). ...
She has read widely in Romantic literature,as appears from her essay. 她广泛涉猎了浪漫主义文学,这从她的文章中可以看出来。 ④as仍然保持作连词时常用的含义,意思是“和……一样”。 David is very tall,as are my brothers. 戴维很高,我的兄弟们也一样高。 2. 大多数关系代词和关系副词均...