试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。 原文: One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。
If she could spend every second of the day there, she would.The other day I was watching Lexie while my daughter, who lives right up the road from me, did some housework. When it was time for Lexie to go home. I could see Lexie's excitement as I leashed(用皮带牵)her up. I ...
【答案】例文: Dear Jack, I’m glad to receive your email. I’d like to share something about the Spring Festival with you. The Spring Festival is one of the most popular traditional festivals in China which falls on the first day of thefirst lunar month. To begin with, the whole famil...
it is not only a seasonal point to guide farm work, but also a festival of commemoration. On the day, people clean graves,set out offerings of food and flowers and burn paper money to offer sacrifice and honor the dead. People also enjoy hope of Spring on this day...
【答案】例文 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. I love running and I have kept running for thr...
He gave up and looked around aimlessly, staring at people’s shoes. Suddenly, his eyes weredrawn to two boyish legs wearing flawlessly white socks and equallyperfectblack leathershoes, which were glittering in the mid-day sun. It was a boy...
【高分句型一】The other children always laugh at him,so he is very sad and feels lonely.One day,his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect, but everyone was unique in their own way.From then on, he and his classmates became good friends.(分享经历) Everyone can be special ...
My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other. The next day, I shared my feelings with Lucy. She suddenly realized that she had not thought about my feelings and apologized for it. She thanked me for keeping my mind open to her. In a word, we should keep ...
I think she's great. We could never live without people like her who is glad to help others. Renee's deed helps me believe that I can do anything. I hope someday to be just like her: to wake up and help people every day.
It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day,but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better,even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem?On the one hand,I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand,I did the homework as quickly as...