Mostly this is a drawing zine, with many pages of anime-looking characters hanging around doing hot girl shit: taking selfies; eating takeout food; going down on each other; getting tied up; smoking cigs; smashing people in the face with yonic fists. But 10 pages are fully finished comics...
not everyone is going to love your book and that just means you're writing for a niche—and you need a niche!). Others will be based on major storytelling concepts, like if a character is likable or plot elements don't make sense (remember my slang problem). ...