作文点评: 该文章整体上看是篇好文章。主要体现在内容充实,不空洞。特别是表示时间的逻辑关系词用得很得当(蓝色字体)。文章中多处体现了从句的使用(红色字体,注意它是什么从句),而不是多个单句的罗列或堆积。 人力1303B李昕瞳(13分) August.27th, 2013, the first day I came to my college, was a day ful...
I still remember the day when I first came to the college. Being a boy of 17, I was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, I had no idea what college life would be like. That morning when the bus carried me to the gate of the college. I was so...
英语作文大学开学第一天 Inasunnymorning,accompaniedbymymotherandfather,IsteppedintoYangzhou University.Itisauniversitywhichhasalonghistoryandwaspraisedbymanygreatpoets. WhenIwasinformedthatIwillstartmycollegelifeinthisdistinguisheduniversity,Ican't chokebackthehappinessinmyheart. Tobeginwith,atmyfirstsightofthecampus...
and I met my college roommates who were going to live with me for four years. They were very friendly and kind. Although not willing to say goodbye to my parents, but the first day of college is really very happy.
我在校园的第一天(My First Day on the Campus) i still remember the day when i first came to the college. being a boy of 17, i was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, i had no idea what college life would be 17 like. that morning when the bus...
我在校园的一天(My First Day on the Campus) remember the day when i first came to the college. being a boy of 17, i was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, i had no idea what college life would be like.
大学生活的第一天(My First Day on the Campus) i still remember the day when i first came to the college. being a boy of 17, i was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, i had no idea what college life would be like. that morning when the bus ...
开学第一天高中英语作文 1 Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried. Entering new school, I was curious about everything, new classrooms, new teachers, new classmates etc. It would...
1、大学生活的第一天(My First Day on the Campus)i still remember the day when i first came to the college. being a boy of 17, i was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, i had no idea what college life would be like.that morning when the bus car...