An attention-winning lead paragraph must go one step further: it must make us care. Show us a character we are intrigued by. Say something that makes us smile. Touch our hearts with a wink or a nod. Remind us that the feelings sparked by images created in our imaginations are far more...
Kinky Jinxy gets stuck in her Bondage Bed - 007 has to bust her out. zzzzzz Other unhealthy titbits are: ‘saved by the bell’, rubbish theme song (sounds like it was thrown together in an afternoon), credits that are integrated with the story (worked for me), an actual appearance by...
With the patient support of fellow writers and my lovely girlfriend Kristin, however, I’M BACK, BABY! Stay tuned! 3. And for those who DON’T know what I’m yammering about, and who would like a preview of what my writing is like before you try on The Mutineer’s Daughter or put...
even if they’re hinted at, or – like the famous ‘gun barrel sequence’ – simplytagged on to the end again. The story, characters and direction are all well above the average for a Bond film; however, more mentions of the previous 22 movies would have been the...