“my thesis is true,” for every body paragraph. Your analysis should add up to more than proving that your thesis is true or valid—it should also question, complicate, and most importantly, evolve your main argument. One way to do
Thus, this section should have mentioned if this analysis is merely based on such a written date, or some carbon or otherwise dating of water-markings or anything else that in fact requires scientific analysis. Instead, most of the body of this paragraph is full of hot-air that does not a...
There are too many contradictions and clashing arguments just on the cover. Then a separate paragraph explains how this book is also about women… or how they were increasingly allowed to participate socially… by riding a bicycle. Now the whole thing is just a complete muddle. And the word ...