(For more on insight/reflection, check out that link, which is focused on the UC PIQs but its content also applies to personal statements.) Bring us into your world. You can do so through things like imagery (e.g., the towering trees blackened by the forest fire a few years ago, the...
Chileans attribute much of their success to copper sales, with them being the “leading producer of the metal in the world” (COHA) and a majority of their economy relying on copper prices. However, while progress has slowed in recent years it does not explain the gradual resolving poverty ...
” says Brian Liechti of Warren Wilson College. “On the other, as one of those people who wrote the words you’re copying, I’d rather see evidence of how what I wrote resonated with you—do we share values?