While they were trying to keep their extracurricular encounters with these topics together in one paragraph, it is far too dense as it’s written, and ideas gets lost in the sheer amount of information presented. Breaking it up would provide relief to the reader and help emphasize each point ...
for me Styles embodies an artist-activist who uses his privilege for the betterment of society. As a $42K donor to the Time's Up Legal Defense Fund, a hair donor to the Little Princess Trust, and promoter of LGBTQ+ equality, he has motivated me to be a more public activist instead of...
Quality of Ideas This category evaluates the “meat” of your essay – the ideas that form your main argument. On the GRE you will be asked to evaluate and respond to an issue. You aren’t being judged on your expertise of the subject matter, but on your ability to make a sustained,...