there may be incorrectly placed commas placed before the first item or after the “and” prior to the last item. In the sentence above, you can’t place a comma after “including” or before “dedication.”
Note that many desktop publishing programs are so advanced that they automatically (and incorrectly) insert “smart” apostrophes and quotation marks in all of these situations. This can be changed in the program’s settings, but the quickest way around this is simply to copy and paste the corr...